Aaj ka akelapan( A short story)
Bhabhi ye aap diary main kya likhti ho.....mahine ka hisab? Kam vali bai ne kavita se pucha to vo has kar boli ...mahine ka nahi ...jindagi ka hisab likhti hu.Bai neeche jameen par baith gayi aur sawaliya najaro se kavita ko dekhne lagi .Bhabhi jindagi ka hisab ...matlab.🤔
Kavita thodi hasi aur phir boli..mere sath kya ho raha hain...main din bhar kya karti hu..mujhe kya acha lagta hain ..kya bura...kub gussa ata hain..kub kush hoti hu..vo sab main is diary main likhti hu.
Bai chakit hokar boli..to aap bhaiya ko aur bacho ko kyun nahi batati.kavita thodi ruki.....phir
gahari saans bhar kar boli...tere bhaiya aur bacho ko mere liye time hi kaha hain.. Beta apne frnds ke sath chatting...beti Facebook frnds...aur tere sahab vo din bhar business ki tension main rahte hain...kahte hain ki ate hi chikchik...let me live my time...
and vo apne mobile main busy.
But haan ye diary ke pas mere liye time hi time hain ...ye meri sari shikayte,gussa, kushi ...sab tasseli se sunti hain ..iske pas bahaut time hain mujhe samjhne ka.
Bai kuch samjhi ...kuch nahi aur apne kam main lag gayi
Agle din sab apne apne kam ki bhag daud main busy the ..kavita sabki jarurat ke according kam kar rahi thi ki tabhi vo chakkar kha kar gir gayi aur behosh ho gayi .sab ghabra gaye aur doctor ke lekar bhage.Doctor ne bataya vo depression main hain ...treatment chalega.sabko surprise hua ki kis baat ka depression tha ...hum ko to pata hi nahi chala... tabhi peeche se bai ki awaj ayi ...sahab aapko pata ho na ho par bhabhi ki diary ko pata hoga ..aap log ke pas time hi kaha tha bhabhi ke liye... aap log ne to apni ek alag hi duniya bana li thi apna akelapan dur karne ke liye.Sab ne ekdum se bai ko peeche mud kar dekha ki ye kya kah rahi hain isko itna kuch kaise pata hain jo hume bhi nahi pata...sab bai ki bat sun kar ek atamglani(guilt) se bhar gaye.....is time sab kavita se bat karna chahte the .....par kavita vo chupchap so rahi thi.
Bai achraj bhari najaro se sabko dekh rahi thi ...ki aaj ye log bhabhi se bat karke apna akelapan dur karna chahte hai 🤔......bhabhi to kubse ye hi chahti thi.
Bhabhi ye aap diary main kya likhti ho.....mahine ka hisab? Kam vali bai ne kavita se pucha to vo has kar boli ...mahine ka nahi ...jindagi ka hisab likhti hu.Bai neeche jameen par baith gayi aur sawaliya najaro se kavita ko dekhne lagi .Bhabhi jindagi ka hisab ...matlab.🤔
Kavita thodi hasi aur phir boli..mere sath kya ho raha hain...main din bhar kya karti hu..mujhe kya acha lagta hain ..kya bura...kub gussa ata hain..kub kush hoti hu..vo sab main is diary main likhti hu.
Bai chakit hokar boli..to aap bhaiya ko aur bacho ko kyun nahi batati.kavita thodi ruki.....phir
gahari saans bhar kar boli...tere bhaiya aur bacho ko mere liye time hi kaha hain.. Beta apne frnds ke sath chatting...beti Facebook frnds...aur tere sahab vo din bhar business ki tension main rahte hain...kahte hain ki ate hi chikchik...let me live my time...
and vo apne mobile main busy.
But haan ye diary ke pas mere liye time hi time hain ...ye meri sari shikayte,gussa, kushi ...sab tasseli se sunti hain ..iske pas bahaut time hain mujhe samjhne ka.
Bai kuch samjhi ...kuch nahi aur apne kam main lag gayi
Agle din sab apne apne kam ki bhag daud main busy the ..kavita sabki jarurat ke according kam kar rahi thi ki tabhi vo chakkar kha kar gir gayi aur behosh ho gayi .sab ghabra gaye aur doctor ke lekar bhage.Doctor ne bataya vo depression main hain ...treatment chalega.sabko surprise hua ki kis baat ka depression tha ...hum ko to pata hi nahi chala... tabhi peeche se bai ki awaj ayi ...sahab aapko pata ho na ho par bhabhi ki diary ko pata hoga ..aap log ke pas time hi kaha tha bhabhi ke liye... aap log ne to apni ek alag hi duniya bana li thi apna akelapan dur karne ke liye.Sab ne ekdum se bai ko peeche mud kar dekha ki ye kya kah rahi hain isko itna kuch kaise pata hain jo hume bhi nahi pata...sab bai ki bat sun kar ek atamglani(guilt) se bhar gaye.....is time sab kavita se bat karna chahte the .....par kavita vo chupchap so rahi thi.
Bai achraj bhari najaro se sabko dekh rahi thi ...ki aaj ye log bhabhi se bat karke apna akelapan dur karna chahte hai 🤔......bhabhi to kubse ye hi chahti thi.
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Yes bhabhi....a bitter truth
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its today's reality
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